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diff --git a/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-arm-template.md b/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-arm-template.md
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ ms.date: 02/16/2023
 
 ## Create a server that has public access
 
-Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance using public access connectivity method and also create a database on the server. Update the **firewallRules** default value if needed.
+To create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance by using the public access connectivity method and create a database on the server, reate an *azuredeploy.json* file that has the following code examples. If necessary, update the `firewallRules` default value.
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure
         "MemoryOptimized"
       ],
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "The tier of the particular SKU. High Availability is available only for GeneralPurpose and MemoryOptimized sku."
+        "description": "The tier of the specific SKU. High vailability is available only for GeneralPurpose and MemoryOptimized SKUs."
       }
     },
     "version": {
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "1",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "Availability Zone information of the server. (Leave blank for No Preference)."
+        "description": "Availability zone information of the server. (If you don't have a preference, leave leave blank.)"
       }
     },
     "haEnabled": {
@@ -103,14 +103,14 @@ Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure
         "ZoneRedundant"
       ],
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "High availability mode for a server : Disabled, SameZone, or ZoneRedundant"
+        "description": "High availability mode for a server: Disabled, SameZone, or ZoneRedundant"
       }
     },
     "standbyAvailabilityZone": {
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "2",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "Availability zone of the standby server."
+        "description": "The availability zone of the standby server."
       }
     },
     "storageSizeGB": {
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure
       "type": "string",
       "defaultValue": "Standard_B1ms",
       "metadata": {
-        "description": "The name of the sku, e.g. Standard_D32ds_v4."
+        "description": "The name of the SKU. For example, Standard_D32ds_v4."
       }
     },
     "backupRetentionDays": {
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ Create an *azuredeploy.json* file with the following content to create an Azure
 
 ## Create a server that has private access
 
-Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server that has private access connectivity inside a virtual network:
+Modify the following code examples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server that has private access connectivity inside a virtual network:
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -488,14 +488,14 @@ Modify the following code samples to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible
 
 Deploy the JSON file by using either the Azure CLI or Azure PowerShell.
 
-# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group create --name exampleRG --location eastus
 az deployment group create --resource-group exampleRG --template-file azuredeploy.json
 ```
 
-# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 New-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG -Location eastus
@@ -510,14 +510,14 @@ Complete the steps to enter the parameter values. When the deployment finishes,
 
 To verify that your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server was created in the resource group:
 
-# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az resource list --resource-group exampleRG
 
 ```
 
-# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
@@ -529,13 +529,13 @@ Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
 
 To delete the resource group and all the resources that are in the resource group:
 
-# [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
+# [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group delete --name exampleRG
 ```
 
-# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Remove-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG
diff --git a/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-bicep.md b/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-bicep.md
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ Follow the instructions to enter the parameter values. When the deployment finis
 
 ## Review deployed resources
 
-Follow these steps to verify if your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance was created in the resource group.
+To verify that your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server was created in the resource group:
 
 # [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
@@ -364,15 +364,15 @@ Get-AzResource -ResourceGroupName exampleRG
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-To delete the resource group and the resources contained in the resource group:
+To delete the resource group and the resources that are contained in the resource group:
 
 # [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
 ```azurecli
 az group delete --name exampleRG
 ```
 
-# [PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
+# [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azure-powershell)
 
 ```azurepowershell
 Remove-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG
@@ -382,5 +382,5 @@ Remove-AzResourceGroup -Name exampleRG
 
 ## Related content
 
-- For a step-by-step tutorial that guides you through the process of creating a Bicep template, see [Quickstart: Create Bicep files with Visual Studio Code](../../azure-resource-manager/bicep/quickstart-create-bicep-use-visual-studio-code.md).
+- For a step-by-step tutorial that guides you through the process of creating a Bicep template, see [Quickstart: Create Bicep files by using Visual Studio Code](../../azure-resource-manager/bicep/quickstart-create-bicep-use-visual-studio-code.md).
 - For a step-by-step tutorial that shows how to build an app by using Azure App Service and MySQL, see[Build a PHP (Laravel) web app with MySQL](tutorial-php-database-app.md).
diff --git a/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-server-cli.md b/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-server-cli.md
@@ -21,11 +21,13 @@ This quickstart shows you how to use [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/get-started-with-azu
 
 ## Open Azure Cloud Shell
 
-[Azure Cloud Shell](../../cloud-shell/overview.md) is a free, interactive shell that you can use to run the steps that are described in this article. It has common Azure tools preinstalled and configured to use with your account.
+[Azure Cloud Shell](../../cloud-shell/overview.md) is a free, interactive shell that you can use to run the steps that are described in this article. In Cloud Shell, common Azure tools are preinstalled and configured to use with your account.
 
-To open Cloud Shell, in the upper-right corner of a code example, select **Try it** corner of a code block. You can also open Cloud Shell in a separate browser tab by going to [https://shell.azure.com/bash](https://shell.azure.com/bash). Select **Copy** to copy a code sample, paste the code in Cloud Shell, and then select **Enter** to run it.
+To open Cloud Shell, in the upper-right corner of a code example, select **Try it**.
 
-If you prefer to install and use the Azure CLI, this quickstart requires Azure CLI version 2.0 or later. Run `az --version` to find the version of your Azure CLI installation. If you need to install or upgrade, see [Install the Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli).
+You can also open Cloud Shell in a separate browser tab by going to [https://shell.azure.com/bash](https://shell.azure.com/bash). Select **Copy** to copy the contents of a code block. In Cloud Shell, paste the code and select **Enter** to run it.
+
+If you prefer to install and use the Azure CLI, this quickstart requires Azure CLI version 2.0 or later. To find the version of your Azure CLI installation. , run `az --version`. If you need to install or upgrade, see [Install the Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -104,7 +106,7 @@ az mysql flexible-server db create -d newdatabase
 ```
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Connections to Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server communicate by using port 3306. If you try to connect from within a corporate network, outbound traffic over port 3306 might not be allowed. If this is the case, you can't connect to your server unless your IT department opens port 3306.
+> Connections to Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server communicate by using port 3306. If you try to connect from within a corporate network, outbound traffic through port 3306 might not be allowed. You can't connect to your server unless your IT department opens port 3306.
 
 ## Get the connection information
 
@@ -149,7 +151,7 @@ The result is in JSON format. Make a note of the values for `fullyQualifiedDomai
 
 ## Connect and test the connection by using the Azure CLI
 
-You can use Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server to connect to your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server by using the `az mysql flexible-server connect` command in the Azure CLI. You can use this command to test connectivity to your database server, create a quick basic database, and run queries directly against your server without installing *mysql.exe* or MySQL Workbench. You can also use the command in interactive mode to run multiple queries at a time.
+You can use Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server to connect to your flexible server by using the `az mysql flexible-server connect` command in the Azure CLI. You can use this command to test connectivity to your database server, create a quick basic database, and run queries directly against your server without installing *mysql.exe* or MySQL Workbench. You can also use the command in interactive mode to run multiple queries at a time.
 
 Run the following script to test and validate the connection to the database from your development environment:
 
@@ -197,7 +199,7 @@ If you created your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server by using private ac
 
 If you created your Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server instance by using public access (allowed IP addresses), you can add your local IP address to the list of firewall rules on your server. For detailed guidance, see [Create or manage firewall rules](how-to-manage-firewall-portal.md).
 
-To connect to the server from your local environment, you can use either [mysql.exe](https://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/8.0/en/mysql.html) or [MySQL Workbench](./connect-workbench.md). Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server supports connecting your client applications to the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server service by using Transport Layer Security (TLS), previously known as Secure Sockets Layer (SSL). TLS is an industry-standard protocol that ensures encrypted network connections between your database server and client applications, so you can adhere to compliance requirements. To connect with your MySQL Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, download the [public SSL certificate](https://dl.cacerts.digicert.com/DigiCertGlobalRootCA.crt.pem) for certificate authority verification. To learn more about connecting with encrypted connections or disabling SSL, see [Connect to Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server by using encrypted connections](how-to-connect-tls-ssl.md).
+To connect to the server from your local environment, you can use either [mysql.exe](https://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/8.0/en/mysql.html) or [MySQL Workbench](./connect-workbench.md). Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server supports connecting your client applications to the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server service by using Transport Layer Security (TLS), previously known as Secure Sockets Layer (SSL). TLS is an industry-standard protocol that ensures encrypted network connections between your database server and client applications, so you can adhere to compliance requirements. To connect with your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, download the [public SSL certificate](https://dl.cacerts.digicert.com/DigiCertGlobalRootCA.crt.pem) for certificate authority verification. To learn more about connecting with encrypted connections or disabling SSL, see [Connect to Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server by using encrypted connections](how-to-connect-tls-ssl.md).
 
 The following example shows how to connect to your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server by using the MySQL command-line client tool. You can install the tool if it's not already installed. Download the DigiCertGlobalRootCA certificate that's required for SSL connections. Use the `--ssl-mode=REQUIRED` connection string setting to enforce TLS/SSL certificate verification. Pass the local certificate file path to the `--ssl-ca` parameter. Replace values with your actual server name and password.
 
@@ -234,13 +236,13 @@ mysql -h mydemoserver.mysql.database.azure.com -u mydemouser -p --ssl=true --ssl
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-If you don't need to use the resources that you created in another quickstart or tutorial, you can delete them by running the following command:
+If you don't need to use the resources that you created for this article in another quickstart or tutorial, you can delete them by running the following command:
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az group delete --name myresourcegroup
 ```
 
-If you want to delete only the server that you created, run the `az mysql server delete` command:
+If you want to delete only the flexible server that you created, run the `az mysql server delete` command:
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az mysql flexible-server delete --resource-group myresourcegroup --name mydemoserver
diff --git a/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-server-portal.md b/articles/mysql/flexible-server/quickstart-create-server-portal.md
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.date: 06/13/2022
 
 [!INCLUDE[applies-to-mysql-flexible-server](../includes/applies-to-mysql-flexible-server.md)]
 
-Azure Database for MySQL flexible server is a managed service that you can use to run, manage, and scale highly available MySQL servers in the cloud. This quickstart shows you how to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server instance by using the Azure portal.
+Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server is a managed service that you can use to run, manage, and scale highly available MySQL servers in the cloud. This quickstart shows you how to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server by using the Azure portal.
 
 If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free Azure account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/) before you begin.
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ In the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), enter your credentials to sign
 
 ## Create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server
 
-You create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server by using a defined set of [compute and storage resources](./concepts-compute-storage.md). You create the server within an [Azure resource group](../../azure-resource-manager/management/overview.md).
+You create an instance of Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server by using a defined set of [compute and storage resources](./concepts-compute-storage.md) to create a flexible server. You create the server within an [Azure resource group](../../azure-resource-manager/management/overview.md).
 
 Complete these steps to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server:
 
@@ -72,16 +72,16 @@ Complete these steps to create an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server:
    > :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-create-server-portal/networking.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Networking tab.":::
    >
 
-1. Select **Review + create** to review your Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server configuration.
+1. Select **Review + create** to review your Azure Database for MySQL flexible server configuration.
 
 1. Select **Create** to provision the server. Provisioning might take a few minutes.
 
-1. On the toolbar, select **Notifications** (the bell icon) to monitor the deployment process. When deployment is finished, you can select **Pin to dashboard** to create a tile for the Azure Database for MySQL flexible server on your Azure portal dashboard. This tile is a shortcut to the server's **Overview** pane. When you select **Go to resource**, the flexible server's **Overview** pane opens.
+1. On the toolbar, select **Notifications** (the bell icon) to monitor the deployment process. When deployment is finished, you can select **Pin to dashboard** to create a tile for the Azure Database for MySQL flexible server on your Azure portal dashboard. This tile is a shortcut to the server's **Overview** pane. When you select **Go to resource**, the **Overview** pane for the flexible server opens.
 
 By default, these databases are created under your server: **information_schema**, **mysql**, **performance_schema**, and **sys**.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> To avoid connectivity problems, check whether your network allows outbound traffic by using port 3306, the port that Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server uses.
+> To avoid connectivity problems, check whether your network allows outbound traffic through port 3306, the port that Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server uses.
 
 ## Connect to the server
 
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ After you select **Connect**, you can see details about how to connect locally b
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-When you no longer need the resources that you created to use in this quickstart, you can delete the resource group that has the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server instance. Select the resource group for the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server resource, and then select **Delete**. Enter the name of the resource group that you want to delete.
+When you no longer need the resources that you created to use in this quickstart, you can delete the resource group that contains the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server instance. Select the resource group for the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server resource, and then select **Delete**. Enter the name of the resource group that you want to delete.
 
 ## Next step
 
