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diff --git a/articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md b/articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md
@@ -5,20 +5,47 @@ author: karlerickson
 ms.author: yuwzho
 ms.service: spring-apps
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/12/2022
+ms.date: 03/20/2023
 ms.custom: devx-track-java, devx-track-azurecli, event-tier1-build-2022, engagement-fy23, references_regions
 ---
 
-# Enterprise Tier in Azure Marketplace
+# Enterprise tier in Azure Marketplace
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Azure Spring Apps is the new name for the Azure Spring Cloud service. Although the service has a new name, you'll see the old name in some places for a while as we work to update assets such as screenshots, videos, and diagrams.
 
 **This article applies to:** ❌ Basic/Standard tier ✔️ Enterprise tier
 
-The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility, portability, and the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime with 24/7 support in a strong partnership with VMware. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise Overview](./overview.md#enterprise-tier-overview).
+This article describes the pricing plans and license requirements for the Enterprise Tier in Azure Spring Apps. 
 
-In addition to the feature parity with the Standard tier, the Enterprise tier offers a powerful managed infrastructure with a rich set of features. These features include app lifecycle management, monitoring, and troubleshooting.
+## Prerequisites
+
+- Your Azure subscription must be registered to the `Microsoft.SaaS` resource provider. For more information, see the [Register resource provider](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types#register-resource-provider) section of [Azure resource providers and types](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types).
+
+- Your Azure subscription must have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
+
+- Your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer). For more information, see the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account).
+
+- Your region must be available. Choose an Azure region currently available. For more information, see [Available Regions for Enterprise Tier](./faq.md#in-which-regions-is-azure-spring-apps-enterprise-tier-available).
+
+- Your organization must allow Azure Marketplace purchases. For more information, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
+
+- Your organization must allow acquisition of any Azure Marketplace software application as described in the [Purchase policy management](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing#purchase-policy-management) section of [Azure Marketplace purchasing](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing).
+
+- You must accept the marketplace legal terms and privacy statements while provisioning the tier on the Azure portal, or you can use the following commands to do so in advance.
+
+  ```azurecli
+  az term accept \
+      --publisher vmware-inc \
+      --product azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2 \
+      --plan asa-ent-hr-mtr
+  ```
+
+## Enterprise tier and VMware Tanzu components
+
+The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility, and portability. Azure Spring Apps also provides the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime with 24/7 support in a strong partnership with VMware. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise Overview](./overview.md#enterprise-tier-overview).
+
+Because the Enterprise tier provides feature parity with the Standard tier, it provides a rich set of features that include app lifecycle management, monitoring, and troubleshooting.
 
 The Enterprise tier provides the following managed VMware Tanzu components that empower enterprises to ship faster:
 
@@ -27,16 +54,22 @@ The Enterprise tier provides the following managed VMware Tanzu components that
 - Service Registry
 - Spring Cloud Gateway
 - API Portal
-- Developer Tools (App Live View and App Accelerator).
+- App Live View
+- App Accelerator
 
-As the most advanced tier in Azure Spring Apps, a Microsoft provided first party Azure service, the Enterprise tier pricing is composed of two parts that comprises all application vCPUs and memory usage:
+As the most advanced tier in Azure Spring Apps, a Microsoft provided first party Azure service, the Enterprise tier pricing is composed of two parts that both calculate vCPU and memory storage in their pricing.
 
-- Infrastructure pricing based on usage by Microsoft.
-- Tanzu component license pricing based on usage by VMware.
+- Infrastructure pricing to Microsoft, includes (on top of) managed Tanzu components.
+- Tanzu licensing pricing to VMware, includes (on top of) vCPU usage to VMware.
+
+To illustrate, consider a Spring app running 730 hours on 4 vCPUs for the app and 5 vCPUs on two Tanzu components. The pricing calculations would be as follows:
+
+- Microsoft infrastructure: `4 + 5 * 730 * vCPU unit price`
+- Tanzu licensing to VMware: `4 vCPU * 730 *  vCPU unit price of Tanzu license`
 
 For more information about pricing, see [Azure Spring Apps pricing](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/spring-apps/).
 
-To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates a [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) that represents a Tanzu component license, and during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise, this offer is automatically purchased on behalf of customers and metered against going forward.
+To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates a [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer). This offer represents a Tanzu component license and during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise, this offer is automatically purchased on behalf of customers.
 
 Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third party offer purchasing with VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared to VMware, according to be agreed upon marketplace terms prior to creating the service.
 
@@ -50,29 +83,6 @@ On the [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) page, you can review
 
 You can use the Azure portal and Azure CLI to provision an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier service instance. You can also select **Subscribe** on the VMware marketplace offer to create the service instance, as Azure Marketplace redirects you to Azure Spring Apps creation page.
 
-## Prerequisites
-
-- Your Azure subscription must be registered to the `Microsoft.SaaS` resource provider. For more information, see the [Register resource provider](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types#register-resource-provider) section of [Azure resource providers and types](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types).
-
-- Your Azure subscription must have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
-
-- Your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer). For more information, see the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account).
-
-- Your region must be available. Choose an Azure region currently available. For more information, see [Available Regions for Enterprise Tier](./faq.md#in-which-regions-is-azure-spring-apps-enterprise-tier-available).
-
-- Your organization must allow Azure Marketplace purchases. For more information, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
-
-- Your organization must allow acquisition of any Azure Marketplace software application as described in the [Purchase policy management](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing#purchase-policy-management) section of [Azure Marketplace purchasing](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing).
-
-- You must accept the marketplace legal terms and privacy statements while provisioning the tier on the Azure portal, or you can use the following commands to do so in advance.
-
-  ```azurecli
-  az term accept \
-      --publisher vmware-inc \
-      --product azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2 \
-      --plan asa-ent-hr-mtr
-  ```
-
 ## Supported geographic locations of billing account
 
 To successfully purchase the [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer), your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in the offer.
