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Author: v-thepet

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-add-vm.md

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ description: Learn how to use the Azure portal to add a virtual machine (VM) to
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.author: rosemalcolm
 author: RoseHJM
-ms.date: 03/19/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.custom: UpdateFrequency2
 
-#customer intent: As a lab user, I want to learn how to create VMs in DevTest Labs so I can use my lab VMs for developing, testing, or training.
+#customer intent: As a lab user, I want to learn how to create VMs in DevTest Labs so I can use lab VMs for developing, testing, or training.
 ---
 
 # Create lab VMs in Azure DevTest Labs

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-attach-detach-data-disk.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn how to use the Azure portal to attach or detach a data disk f
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.author: rosemalcolm
 author: RoseHJM
-ms.date: 03/19/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.custom: UpdateFrequency2
 
 #customer intent: As a lab user, I want to attach and detach data disks for my DevTest Labs VMs so I can manage storage or software separately from individual VMs.

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-concepts.md

@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ description: Learn about some basic Azure DevTest Labs concepts related to labs,
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.author: rosemalcolm
 author: RoseHJM
-ms.date: 03/19/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.custom: UpdateFrequency2
 
 #customer intent: As a lab user or administrator, I want to understand basic DevTest Labs concepts so I can manage or use labs, VMs, and environments.
 ---
 
-# DevTest Labs concepts
+# Azure DevTest Labs concepts
 
 This article describes key [Azure DevTest Labs](https://azure.microsoft.com/services/devtest-lab) concepts and definitions. DevTest Labs is a service for easily creating, using, and managing Azure virtual machines (VMs) and other resources.
 
@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ A DevTest Labs lab is the infrastructure that encompasses a group of resources s
 
 - Lab **Owners** can do all lab tasks, including reading or writing to lab resources, setting policies and configurations, adding repositories and base images, and managing users. Only lab Owners can add and manage lab users and roles. For more information about managing user access and roles, see [Add lab owners, contributors, and users](devtest-lab-add-devtest-user.md).
 
-  Lab Owners must have at least Contributor rights in the Azure subscription their lab is in. Subscription Owners can access all subscription resources and user assignments, so they automatically inherit the Owner role for labs in their subscriptions.
-
   Lab Owners can also create and assign custom DevTest Labs roles. For more information, see [Grant user permissions to specific lab policies](devtest-lab-grant-user-permissions-to-specific-lab-policies.md).
 
-- Lab **Contributors** can do everything that lab Owners can, such as create and configure labs and policies, but they can't assign or manage users and roles.
+  A lab Owner must either be an Owner of the Azure subscription the lab is in, or a subscription or lab Owner must grant them the lab Owner role. Subscription Owners can access all subscription resources and users, so they automatically inherit the Owner role for labs in their subscriptions.
+
+- Lab **Contributors** can do everything that lab Owners can, such as create and configure labs and policies, except they can't assign or manage users and roles. Azure subscription Contributors can create labs, but they aren't Owners of those labs unless they inherit or are granted the lab Owner role.
 
 - **DevTest Labs Users** can view all lab resources and policies and can create and modify their own VMs and environments, within policy restrictions such as number of VMs per user.
 

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-upload-vhd-using-storage-explorer.md

@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 ---
-title: Upload a VHD file to a lab by using Storage Explorer
+title: Upload a VHD file to lab storage by using Storage Explorer
 description: Walk through the steps to upload a virtual hard disk (VHD) file to a DevTest Labs lab storage account by using Azure Storage Explorer.
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.author: rosemalcolm
 author: RoseHJM
-ms.date: 03/19/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.custom: UpdateFrequency2
 
-#customer intent: As a lab user, I want to learn how to upload a VHD to a lab storage account so I can use the VHD to create a custom image and VMs.
+#customer intent: As a lab user, I want to learn how to upload a VHD to a lab storage account so I can use the VHD to create a custom image and lab VMs.
 ---
 
-# Upload a VHD file to a lab by using Storage Explorer
+# Upload a VHD file to lab storage by using Storage Explorer
 
 [!INCLUDE [devtest-lab-upload-vhd-selector](../../includes/devtest-lab-upload-vhd-selector.md)]
 

articles/devtest-labs/use-command-line-start-stop-virtual-machines.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Use Azure PowerShell or Azure CLI command lines and scripts to star
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.author: rosemalcolm
 author: RoseHJM
-ms.date: 03/19/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.custom: devx-track-azurepowershell, devx-track-azurecli, UpdateFrequency2 
 ms.devlang: azurecli
 
@@ -27,12 +27,12 @@ This article shows how you can use PowerShell or Azure CLI commands to script or
 # [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
 
 - Admin access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
-- Access to Azure PowerShell. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell PowerShell environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure PowerShell](/powershell/azure/install-azure-powershell) to use locally. If necessary, run `Update-Module -Name Az` to update your local installation.
+- Access to Azure PowerShell. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell PowerShell environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure PowerShell](/powershell/azure/install-azure-powershell) to use a physical or virtual machine. If necessary, run `Update-Module -Name Az` to update your installation.
 
 # [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
 
 - Admin access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
-- Access to Azure CLI. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell Bash environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli) to use locally in a Bash or Windows environment.
+- Access to Azure CLI. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell Bash environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli) to use a physical or virtual machine with a Bash or Windows environment.
 
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