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learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/3-azure-migration-drivers.yml

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ quiz:
       explanation: Datacenter contract expiration is the only migration trigger listed here. The others are cash flow challenges and resource constraints, business continuity, and cybersecurity threats.
     - content: Datacenter contract expiration, cash flow challenges and resource constraints, business continuity, cybersecurity threats
       isCorrect: true
-      explanation: Migration triggers are typically IT-oriented or based on timelines. The migration to the cloud is driven by the need to quickly reduce on-premises costs, stay secure, and simplify operations.
+      explanation: Migration triggers are typically IT-oriented or based on timelines. The need to quickly reduce on-premises costs, stay secure, and simplify operations drives migration to the cloud.
   - content: When you consider if you should migrate or modernize your applications, which is the first question you should ask during the evaluation?
     choices:
     - content: Will there be future development on this application?

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/2-azure-benefits.md

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ To ensure resiliency, there's a minimum of three separate zones in all enabled r
 
 ### Maintenance and Service Health alerts
 
-Azure has invested in improving zero-impact and low-impact update technologies including hot patching, live migration, and in-place migration. The Azure operations team deploys dozens of security and reliability patches to host infrastructure each year, many of which were implemented with no customer impact or downtime.
+Azure has invested in improving zero-impact and low-impact update technologies including hotpatches, live migration, and in-place migration. The Azure operations team deploys dozens of security and reliability patches to host infrastructure each year, many of which were implemented with no customer impact or downtime.
 
 ### Machine learning-driven failure prediction
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Protect your workloads quickly with built-in controls and services in Azure acro
 
 #### Detect threats early with unique intelligence
 
-Identify new threats and respond quickly with services that are informed by real-time global cybersecurity intelligence delivered at cloud scale. These actionable insights are developed by analyzing vast sources including 18 billion Bing web pages, 400 billion emails, 1 billion Windows device updates, and 450 billion monthly authentications. Using machine learning, behavioral analytics, and application-based intelligence, Microsoft data scientists analyze the flood of data in the Microsoft Intelligent Security Graph. The resulting insights inform services in Azure and help you detect threats faster.
+Services informed by real-time global cybersecurity intelligence delivered at cloud scale help identify new threats and quick responses. These actionable insights are developed by analyzing vast sources including 18 billion Bing web pages, 400 billion emails, 1 billion Windows device updates, and 450 billion monthly authentications. Using machine learning, behavioral analytics, and application-based intelligence, Microsoft data scientists analyze the flood of data in the Microsoft Intelligent Security Graph. The resulting insights inform services in Azure and help you detect threats faster.
 
 ## Hybrid flexibility
 

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/3-azure-migration-drivers.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ As the solution architect on the Tailwind Traders team, you need to understand t
 
 ## Migration triggers
 
-Migration triggers are typically IT-oriented or based on timelines. The migration to the cloud is driven by the need to quickly reduce on-premises costs, stay secure, and simplify operations. These triggers include:
+Migration triggers are typically IT-oriented or based on timelines. The need to quickly reduce on-premises costs, stay secure, and simplify operations drives the migration to the cloud. These triggers include:
 
 - Datacenter contract expiration
 - Cash flow challenges and resource constraints
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Moving to the cloud can help ensure security and resilience for business-critica
 
 - By moving core business applications to the cloud, you can minimize the number of disruptions and more easily maintain operations, which
 are often among the top concerns for organizations.
-- By taking advantage of native disaster recovery and high availability services, you can ensure that applications are not only resilient, but can also scale up or down to meet performance demands.
+- By taking advantage of native disaster recovery and high availability services, you can ensure that applications aren't only resilient, but can also scale up or down to meet performance demands.
 - Azure provides options for replicating key workloads across different regions, so their uptime is maximized. It also provides built-in recovery options so the risk of losing important apps or data is severely reduced, if not eliminated entirely.
 
 Azure was designed for business continuity and disaster recovery with solutions built into the regions (datacenters) and many services including:
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ The cloud presents new opportunities for innovation:
 
 ### Faster time to market
 
-Application modernization can help you develop and bring applications to market much faster. By using Azure, developers aren't constrained by the lead time to procure and build on-premises systems and databases. These extended lead times for infrastructure slowed down your development efforts in the past.
+Application modernization can help you develop and bring applications to market much faster. By using Azure, developers can build on-premises systems and databases without the lead time constraints of procurement and build processes. These extended lead times for infrastructure slowed down your development efforts in the past.
 
 - You can start up Azure App Service in a matter of minutes to start developing a website. Previously you might have had to create a new server, patch the servers, install Internet Information Services (IIS), and make any necessary configuration changes. Now you can start developing your application immediately rather than waiting for days to start.
 - Modernizing applications using serverless in Azure once again provides the ability to bring solutions and updates to the market with even less infrastructure. Leveraging services like Azure Kubernetes Services, Azure Functions, Azure Logic Apps, and Azure AI services, developers have many options for building applications.

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/4-cloud-journey-phases.md

@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ Governance is a key factor to the long-term success of any effort. The speed to
 
 [Azure Policy](/azure/governance/policy/overview?azure-portal=true) is an important tool when implementing the policies of your business. Azure Policy helps to enforce organizational standards and to assess compliance at-scale. Through its compliance dashboard, it provides an aggregated view to evaluate the overall state of the environment, with the ability to drill down to the per-resource and per-policy granularity. It also helps to bring your resources to compliance through bulk remediation for existing resources and automatic remediation for new resources.
 
-:::image type="content" source="../media/select-assignments.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure Portal showing the Policy dashboard.":::
+:::image type="content" source="../media/select-assignments.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing the Policy dashboard.":::
 
 ### Manage
 

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/5-common-migration-projects.md

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Azure is the cloud that knows SQL Server best. There are many options for the mi
 
 ### SQL Server on a virtual machine
 
-A typical reason for migrating SQL to Azure is that a two-tier application is being moved, a Windows .NET front-end application connected to SQL Server running on VMs. These applications can be migrated by simply moving the servers by using [Azure Migrate](https://azure.microsoft.com/services/azure-migrate/?azure-portal=true) and hosting them using IaaS. They run just as they did in the datacenter, only now they're connected to a virtual network running in Azure.
+A typical reason for migrating SQL to Azure is that a two-tier application is being moved, a Windows .NET front-end application connected to SQL Server running on VMs. Using [Azure Migrate](https://azure.microsoft.com/services/azure-migrate/?azure-portal=true), you can move the servers to migrate and host them using IaaS. They run just as they did in the datacenter, only now they're connected to a virtual network running in Azure.
 
 ### Azure SQL Server Managed Instance
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Using [Azure VMware Solution](https://azure.microsoft.com/products/azure-vmware)
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/migrate-modernize-vmware.png" alt-text="Diagram showing how to migrate VMware VMs to Azure.":::
 
-Tailwind Traders can use Azure VMware Solution to create a private cloud in Azure with native access to VMware vCenter and other tools that are supported by VMware for workload migration. Move to Azure seamlessly using VMware’s HCX technology and continue to manage your environment using the same VMware tools you already know like vSphere Client, NSX-T, Power CLI, or any popular DevOps toolchain.
+Tailwind Traders can use Azure VMware Solution to create a private cloud in Azure with native access to VMware vCenter and other tools. VMware for workload migration supports these. Move to Azure seamlessly using VMware’s HCX technology and continue to manage your environment using the same VMware tools you already know like vSphere Client, NSX-T, Power CLI, or any popular DevOps toolchain.
 
 Once deployed to Azure VMware Solution, you can create vSphere VMs in the Azure portal via API calls or CLI, automate deployments, and enable single sign-on. Enhance your workloads with the full range of Azure compute, monitor, backup, database, IoT, and AI services.
 

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/6-azure-migration-tools.md

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ The tool's output contains a readiness heatmap tool that helps to identify the a
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/smart-tool.png" alt-text="Diagram showing the SMART Assessment Tool.":::
 
-This tool addresses your readiness across all dimensions of migration, from initial strategy to ongoing management. By answering a few questions you get a customized report that helps you plan and close gaps.
+This tool addresses your readiness across all dimensions of migration, from initial strategy to ongoing management. By answering a few questions, you get a customized report that helps you plan and close gaps.
 
 ## Cloud economics
 

learn-pr/azure/accelerate-azure-migration-journey/includes/7-azure-migration-programs.md

@@ -54,4 +54,4 @@ When you see the Azure Expert MSP logo, this means Microsoft has validated that
 
 - Microsoft Gold Cloud Platform Partner.
 - Pass an intensive audit performed by Microsoft.
-- Re-evaluated annually to ensure MSP continues to meet updated technology standards.
+- Reevaluated annually to ensure MSP continues to meet updated technology standards.