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learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/2-govern-data.md

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-Microsoft Fabric includes a set of governance and compliance capabilities that may be sufficient for the needs of some organizations. Additional governance capabilities may be accessed in Microsoft Purview.
+Microsoft Fabric includes a set of governance and compliance capabilities that might be sufficient for the needs of some organizations. Other governance capabilities can be accessed in Microsoft Purview.
 
-If, for example, you work at a health care company, you have have specific data governance needs because of regulatory requirements. In this unit, we'll explore Fabric's governance features so you can assess if they meet your requirements.  
+If, for example, you work at a health care company, you have specific data governance needs because of regulatory requirements. In this unit, we'll explore Fabric's governance features so you can assess if they meet your requirements.  
 
 ## What is Microsoft Fabric?
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/3-why-purview-fabric.md

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 Microsoft Purview enables you to discover, manage, and protect Fabric data using Purview tools. Purview can be configured to scan your Fabric item and present data governance findings in the Purview Hub located in Fabric or in Purview itself. To unlock the following capabilities, register your Fabric tenant in Microsoft Purview. 
 
 ### Microsoft Purview Data Map
-Data Map can be used to scan all of your data assets, to capture metadata about them and to identify sensitive data. It captures metadata about data in existing analytics, software-as-a-service, and operational systems in hybrid, on-premise and multi-cloud environments. There is a built in scanning and classification system that keeps the Data Map updated.
+Data Map can be used to scan all of your data assets, to capture metadata about them and to identify sensitive data. It captures metadata about data in existing analytics, software-as-a-service, and operational systems in hybrid, on-premise, and multicloud environments. There's a built-in scanning and classification system that keeps the Data Map updated.
 
 ### Microsoft Purview Unified Catalog
 
-The Purview Unified Catalog is a searchable catalog of your scanned data where you curate, grant access to and improve the health of your data.  
+The Purview Unified Catalog is a searchable catalog of your scanned data where you curate, grant access to and, improve the health of your data.  
 
 In the Purview Unified Catalog, you can inventory of all your data assets, their metadata, and their lineage so you can understand the topography of your data estate. You can search for and browse datasets, and view metadata, data lineage, classification, and sensitivity labels. The Unified Catalog promotes collaboration because users can annotate datasets with tags to improve discoverability.
 
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 Auditing solutions in Purview are used to search for activities performed in Microsoft services by users and admins. User activities such as creating files or accessing Fabric items are automatically logged and appear in the Purview audit log.
 
-Thorough auditing is an important protection for the policies you have applied for patient records. For example, if a malicious administrator changes DLP policies so that they can copy a patient record to a USB device, this change is recorded and can be identified during later investigations.
+Thorough auditing is an important protection for the policies you apply to patient records. For example, if a malicious administrator changes DLP policies so that they can copy a patient record to a USB device, this change is recorded and can be identified during later investigations.
 
 ## Learn more
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/4-govern-data-purview-hub.md

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 To govern Microsoft Fabric items using Microsoft Purview, you first need to establish a connection between Fabric and Purview. Once connected, the Microsoft Purview hub becomes available within Fabric, offering in-depth analysis and insights into your Fabric items. The Purview Hub acts as a gateway between Fabric and Purview.
 
-Imagine you're part of a healthcare organization that has recently adopted Microsoft Purview. Now, you're ready to connect it to Fabric and explore the insights Purview provides on your Fabric data in the Microsoft Purview Hub.  
+Imagine you're part of a healthcare organization that recently adopted Microsoft Purview. Now, you're ready to connect it to Fabric and explore the insights Purview provides on your Fabric data in the Microsoft Purview Hub.  
 
 In this unit, you'll explore the Purview hub.
 

learn-pr/wwl/fabric-data-governance-purview/includes/govern-data-purview-hub.md

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       explanation: "Correct. This report is in the Purview Hub."
     - content: "Audit report."
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "Incorrect. This is not the name of a report in the Purview Hub."
+      explanation: "Incorrect. This isn't the name of a report in the Purview Hub."
     - content: "Workspace items report"
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "Incorrect. This is not the name of a report in the Purview Hub."
+      explanation: "Incorrect. This isn't the name of a report in the Purview Hub."
   - content: "Which feature does Microsoft Purview add to Microsoft Fabric for data governance?"
     choices:
     - content: "Real-time data processing capabilities."
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "Incorrect. Real-time data processing is not a feature of Microsoft Purview."
+      explanation: "Incorrect. Real-time data processing isn't a feature of Microsoft Purview."
     - content: "Enhanced data visualization tools."
       isCorrect: false
-      explanation: "Incorrect. Data visualization is not a focus of Microsoft Purview."
+      explanation: "Incorrect. Data visualization isn't a focus of Microsoft Purview."
     - content: "Centralized data cataloging and compliance monitoring."
       isCorrect: true
       explanation: "Correct. Microsoft Purview provides centralized cataloging and compliance features for data governance."