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@TimHess TimHess commented Mar 6, 2025

Most of the changes are for tech writing rules, VMware/Broadcom style rules, and consistency internal to the doc set.

  • turned some long lines into bullet lists or procedures.
  • changed some headings and a couple of titles in the TOC so that the reader can more easily tell what's in the topic or section. - changed most instances of "Usage" to something more informative. 🙂

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Thanks Tim. Please review my changes.

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@TimHess I've pushed changes, based on what we discussed in Zoom today. Can you please review?

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I've done a final pass over all changes and pushed some corrections.

@bart-vmware bart-vmware merged commit 1bd9055 into main Apr 4, 2025
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