Updates from Kevin Keech review

Author: jpipkin1

blog-service/2025-05-10-manage.md

@@ -10,6 +10,6 @@ hide_table_of_contents: true
 
 import useBaseUrl from '@docusaurus/useBaseUrl';
 
-We're happy to introduce a new way to rotate access keys, as well as a new access keys expiration policy to ensure you rotate keys regularly.
+We're happy to introduce a new way to rotate access keys, as well as a new access keys expiration policy. Together these help to make your account more secure by encouraging regular API key updates.
 
 [Learn more](/docs/manage/security/access-keys/#access-keys-expiration-policy).

docs/manage/security/access-keys.md

@@ -114,5 +114,5 @@ To configure the access keys expiration policy:
 1. [**Classic UI**](/docs/get-started/sumo-logic-ui-classic). In the main Sumo Logic menu, select **Administration > Security > Policies**. <br/>[**New UI**](/docs/get-started/sumo-logic-ui). In the top menu select **Administration**, and then under **Account Security Settings** select **Policies**. You can also click the **Go To...** menu at the top of the screen and select **Policies**. 
 1. Under the **Access Keys Expiration** section, select a value in the **Expiration** field. <br/><img src={useBaseUrl('img/security/access-key-expiration-policy.png')} alt="Access keys expiration settings in Sumo Logic, allowing automatic expiration of API access keys after a specified number of days." style={{border: '1px solid gray'}} width="600"/>
     :::warning
-    When you set the policy, all access keys inherit the new policy, and the expiration date for all access keys is reset. For example, if you change the policy to 90 days, then all access keys expire 90 days from the time the policy is set, not from the time of creation or last rotation.
+    When you change the policy, all access keys inherit the new policy, and the expiration date for all access keys is reset. For example, if you change the policy to 90 days, then the expiration date is reset on all access keys to 90 days from the date the policy was changed.
     :::