Proof reading: working with data workshop info

Author: liamjberrisford

individual_modules/working_with_data_in_R/LICENSE.txt

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programme_information/working_with_data_in_r.ipynb

@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
     "\n",
     "## Course Objectives \n",
     "On completion of this series of workshops, participants will:\n",
-    "- Be able to explain what is meant by the ‘tidy’ format (a widely recognised convention for structuring data).\n",
+    "- Learn to explain what is meant by the ‘tidy’ format (a widely recognised convention for structuring data).\n",
     "- Know how to read tabular data from a file to a dataframe.\n",
-    "- Be able to manipulate datasets, including creating new variables, filtering data, summarising and sorting data.\n",
+    "- Manipulate datasets, including creating new variables, filtering data, summarising and sorting data.\n",
     "- Know how to join multiple datasets together and reshape data.\n",
     "- Learn how to work with strings and dates (as time permits).\n",
     "- Gain hands on experience working with R notebooks for analysis.\n",
@@ -32,23 +32,23 @@
     "\n",
     "## Installation Guide \n",
     "\n",
-    "In order to fully participate in this course, you should bring a laptop to work\n",
-    "on during the sessions and make sure you have the following installed on it\n",
-    "**before** the first session.\n",
+    "All CfRR courses require attendees to use their own computer/laptop to follow workshop activities and take effective notes. \n",
     "\n",
-    "- R, version 4.1 or later. You can install this from the University's\n",
+    "Ensure you have the following installed **before** the first session.\n",
+    "\n",
+    "- **R, version 4.1 or later** You can install this from the University's\n",
     "  Company Portal software repository. Alternatively, visit\n",
     "  <a href=\"https://cran.rstudio.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"external noreferrer\">https://cran.rstudio.com</a>,\n",
     "  or adopt whatever method you usually use.\n",
     "  \n",
-    "- RStudio desktop. You can download this from the University's\n",
+    "- **RStudio desktop** You can download this from the University's\n",
     "  Company Portal software repository. Alternatively, visit\n",
     "  <a href=\"https://posit.co/download/rstudio-desktop/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"external noreferrer\">https://posit.co/download/rstudio-desktop/</a>.\n",
     "  We will use RStudio to work with R notebooks throughout the course. If you have\n",
     "  another way of working with R notebooks that you prefer, then you are welcome\n",
     "  to use this, but we recommend using RStudio if you're unsure.\n",
     "\n",
-    "- Ensure you have following R packages installed:\n",
+    "- Ensure you have the following R packages installed:\n",
     "  - `tidyverse`\n",
     "  - `palmerpenguins` (This contains a dataset we'll use in examples during the\n",
     "    course.)\n",