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@leemthompo leemthompo added >docs General docs changes Team:Docs Meta label for docs team v8.14.0 v8.15.0 labels Aug 29, 2024
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Pinging @elastic/es-docs (Team:Docs)

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You'll use the following connection details:
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the collapsible title indicates to me that you're just hiding examples, but it looks like you're also hiding the default endpoint and auth details here

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ah 💯 I'll reword the text because I actually want to clear as much real estate as possible on this page :)

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@shainaraskas do you think we could get away with pulling out this text from intro too?

Feels like excessive text is clogging up reader's working memory. Want this to really be about copying and running the ~5 commands.

When would I use this setup?

Use this setup if you want to quickly spin up Elasticsearch (and Kibana) for local development or testing.

For example you might:

Want to run a quick test to see how a feature works.
Follow a tutorial or guide that requires an Elasticsearch cluster, like our quick start guide.
Experiment with the Elasticsearch APIs using different tools, like the Dev Tools Console, cURL, or an Elastic programming language client.
Quickly spin up an Elasticsearch cluster to test an executable Python notebook locally.

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I like it. people don't have to read it if they don't care - we have scannable headings on the page they can use to jump to the part they are interested in.

personally, I don't agree with hiding content behind a collapsible element, but since it pops open when we search it's ok


To connect to the {es} cluster from a language client, you can use basic authentication with the `elastic` username and the password you set in the environment variable.

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I dunno if I love this bolding - feels like all of it or none of it should be bolded

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I need a style guide refresh on some of this stuff, merging for now :)

@leemthompo leemthompo merged commit 3d2ca69 into main Sep 2, 2024
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@leemthompo leemthompo deleted the leemthompo-patch-local-collapsible branch September 2, 2024 08:28
cbuescher pushed a commit to cbuescher/elasticsearch that referenced this pull request Sep 4, 2024
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* [DOCS] Collapse some content in local dev setup for readability

* Reword collapsible text
leemthompo added a commit to leemthompo/elasticsearch that referenced this pull request Sep 11, 2024
…tic#112355)

* [DOCS] Collapse some content in local dev setup for readability

* Reword collapsible text

(cherry picked from commit 3d2ca69)
leemthompo added a commit to leemthompo/elasticsearch that referenced this pull request Sep 11, 2024
…tic#112355)

* [DOCS] Collapse some content in local dev setup for readability

* Reword collapsible text

(cherry picked from commit 3d2ca69)
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elasticsearchmachine pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 11, 2024
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* [DOCS] Collapse some content in local dev setup for readability

* Reword collapsible text

(cherry picked from commit 3d2ca69)
elasticsearchmachine pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Sep 11, 2024
) (#112738)

* [DOCS] Collapse some content in local dev setup for readability

* Reword collapsible text

(cherry picked from commit 3d2ca69)
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