Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Alex Krawiec <[email protected]>

Author: c298lee

docs/product/dev-toolbar/index.mdx

@@ -15,38 +15,35 @@ Developers spend a lot of time troubleshooting their web apps on local, staging,
 
 ## Issues Panel
 
-The issues panel shows you your highest priority frontend [issues](https://docs.sentry.io/product/issues/) for the page you are currently viewing. From the Dev Toolbar, you can quickly jump into specific issues in Sentry to get more detailed information (e.g. Sentry project, issue title, and description, and when the issue was first and last seen) and take action (e.g. assign to a team member or mark as resolved). With the issues panel, you can browse the pages that are most important to your business and understand the top issues impacting your user base.
+The issues panel shows you your highest priority frontend [issues](https://docs.sentry.io/product/issues/) for the page you are currently viewing. From the Dev Toolbar, you can quickly jump into specific issues in Sentry to get more detailed information (examples: Sentry project, issue title, description, and when the issue was first and last seen) and take action (examples: assign to a team member or mark as resolved). With the issues panel, you can browse the pages that are most important to your business and understand the top issues impacting your user base.
 
 ![Dev Toolbar with the Issues Panel open](./img/issues-panel.png)
 
 ## Feedback Panel
 
-The feedback panel shows you the most recent user feedback messages for the page you are on, so you can more easily contextualize user feedback. The feedback often describes suboptimal experiences that are not strictly code-thrown errors, such as misleading UX, broken links, and typos. The feedback panel works by pulling feedback messages from [Sentry’s User Feedback Widget](https://docs.sentry.io/product/user-feedback/#user-feedback-widget). Just like with the Issues panel, clicking on a particular user feedback will take you to the full detailed User Feedback page within Sentry.
+The feedback panel shows you the most recent user feedback messages for the page you are on, so you can more easily contextualize it. The feedback often describes suboptimal experiences that are not strictly code-thrown errors, such as misleading UX, broken links, and typos. The feedback panel works by pulling feedback messages from [Sentry’s User Feedback Widget](https://docs.sentry.io/product/user-feedback/#user-feedback-widget). Just like with the Issues panel, clicking on a particular user feedback will take you to the full detailed User Feedback page within Sentry.
 
 ![Dev Toolbar with the Feedback Panel open](./img/feedback-panel.png)
 
 ## Feature Flags Panel
 
-Feature flags are a powerful tool that allow you to control the visibility of features in your app, enabling you to ship, test, and experiment with confidence. The feature flag panel allows you to quickly view and override feature flags locally. You can override any feature flag to be `true` or `false` for your browser session, so you can verify its behavior and observe the impact it might have on errors. Learn more about how to [configure the feature flag panel](/product/dev-toolbar/setup/#implement-feature-flag-adapter).
+Feature flags are a powerful tool that allow you to control the visibility of features in your app, enabling you to ship, test, and experiment with confidence. The feature flag panel allows you to quickly view and override feature flags locally. You can override any feature flag to be `true` or `false` for your browser session, so you can verify its behavior and observe the impact it might have on errors. Learn more about how to [configure the feature flag panel](/product/dev-toolbar/setup/#implement-feature-flag-adapter) and [what data Sentry can track](/product/explore/feature-flags/) related to your feature flagging system.
 
-<Note>
-    [Learn more](/product/explore/feature-flags/) about what data Sentry can track related to your feature flagging system.
-</Note>
 
 ![Dev Toolbar with the Feature Flags Panel open](./img/feature-flags-panel.png)
 
 ## Login Flow
 
-After setting up the Dev Toolbar you’ll see a “Login to Sentry” button floating in the center of the page. To access any information from your Sentry organization you have to click this button and login to sentry.
+After setting up the Dev Toolbar you’ll see a “Login to Sentry” button floating in the center of the page. To access any information from your Sentry organization, you have to click this button and login to Sentry.
 ![Dev Toolbar login button](./img/login-button.png)
 
-After clicking the button, you will see a pop up for logging in to Sentry.
+After clicking the button, you will see a pop-up window for logging in to Sentry.
 ![Sentry log in pop up](./img/login-popup.png)
 
 If it's your first time setting up the Dev Toolbar, there will be a button with a link to Sentry's Dev Toolbar settings page to configure your domain.
 ![Dev Toolbar configure domains button](./img/configure-domain.png)
 
-You'll need to add your domain URL to Allowed Origins in Sentry on the Settings > Project > Dev Toolbar page.
+You'll need to add your domain URL to Allowed Origins in Sentry on the **Settings > Project > Dev Toolbar** page.
 ![Sentry's Dev Toolbar Settings Page](./img/sentry-toolbar-settings.png)
 
 Learn more about setting up the toolbar, including configuring a feature flag provider and integrating the toolbar in different environments, on the next page.