DOCSP-24594 copy edits

Author: ltran-mdb2

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/advanced-connection.txt

@@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Advanced` tab configured
-with the read preference of :guilabel:`Secondary Preferred`. The
+The following example specifies a connection with a read preference of
+:guilabel:`Secondary Preferred` in the :guilabel:`Advanced` tab. The
 :guilabel:`Secondary Preferred` read preference prevents queries from
 overloading the primary node. 
 

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/authentication-connection.txt

@@ -274,17 +274,23 @@ Procedure
 
    To disconnect from your deployment, see :ref:`<disconnect-tab>`.
 
-Example
--------
+Examples
+--------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`Authentication` tab
-configured for username and password authentication with
-:manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256 </core/security-scram/>`.
+Username and Password Authentication
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+The following screenshot specifies a connection with username and
+password authentication with :manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256
+</core/security-scram/>` in the :guilabel:`Authentication` tab.
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/authentication-configuration.png
    :figwidth: 662px
    :alt: Screenshot of Compass configured to authenticate with username and password
 
+LDAP Authentication
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
 Alternatively, the following screenshot shows the
 :guilabel:`Authentication` tab configured for :manual:`LDAP
 </core/security-ldap-external/>` authentication.  

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/general-connection.txt

@@ -110,10 +110,11 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`General` tab configured
-for an Atlas cluster with :manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256
-</core/security-scram/>`. Since the connection uses the ``mongodb+srv``
-connection string scheme, the connection automatically enables TLS/SSL. 
+The following example specifies a connection with :manual:`SCRAM-SHA-256
+</core/security-scram/>` in the :guilabel:`General` tab . Since the
+connection uses the ``mongodb+srv`` connection string scheme, the
+connection automatically enables TLS/SSL. 
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/new-atlas-connection.png
+   :figwidth: 662px
    :alt: Screenshot of Compass configured to connect to an example Atlas cluster

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/tls-ssl-connection.txt

@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@ Procedure
 Example
 -------
 
-The following screenshot shows the :guilabel:`TLS / SSL` tab configured
-for a cluster with TLS/SSL enabled. 
+The following example specifies a connection with TLS/SSL enabled in the
+:guilabel:`TLS / SSL` tab.
 
 .. figure:: /images/authentication/tls-ssl-configuration.png
    :figwidth: 662px