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Author: ajhuh-mdb

source/collections.txt

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Required Roles
 --------------
 
 The following table describes the roles required to perform
-various actions to a database on an Atlas cluster:
+various actions on an Atlas cluster database:
 
 .. list-table::
    :header-rows: 1

source/create-agg-pipeline.txt

@@ -59,11 +59,11 @@ collection.
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To create and execute aggregation pipelines for an Atlas cluster, you must have 
-the :authrole:`Project Data Access Read Only` role or higher.
+To create and execute aggregation pipelines for an Atlas cluster, you must at 
+least have the :authrole:`Project Data Access Read Only` role.
 
-To utilize the :pipeline:`$out` stage in your pipeline, you must
-have the :authrole:`Project Data Access Read/Write` role.
+To use the :pipeline:`$out` stage in your pipeline, you must have the 
+:authrole:`Project Data Access Read/Write` role.
 
 Steps
 -----

source/documents/delete-multiple.txt

@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ the latest |compass-short| version, see :ref:`download-install`.
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To delete multiple documents, you must have access granted through one of the 
-following roles:
+To delete multiple documents, you must have privileges granted through one of 
+the following roles:
 
 - :authrole:`Project Owner` or :authrole:`Organization Owner`
 - :authrole:`Project Data Access Admin`

source/documents/delete.txt

@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ Delete Single Document
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To delete documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have access granted through 
-one of the following roles:
+To delete documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have privileges granted 
+through one of the following roles:
 
 - :authrole:`Project Owner` or :authrole:`Organization Owner`
 - :authrole:`Project Data Access Admin`

source/documents/insert.txt

@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ Field-by-Field Editor
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To insert documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have access granted through 
-one of the following roles:
+To insert documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have privileges granted 
+through one of the following roles:
 
 - :authrole:`Project Owner` or :authrole:`Organization Owner`
 - :authrole:`Project Data Access Admin`

source/documents/modify-multiple.txt

@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ the latest |compass-short| version, see :ref:`download-install`.
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To edit multiple documents, you must have access granted through one of the 
-following roles:
+To edit multiple documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have privileges granted 
+through one of the following roles:
 
 - :authrole:`Project Owner` or :authrole:`Organization Owner`
 - :authrole:`Project Data Access Admin`

source/documents/modify.txt

@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ You can edit existing documents in your collection.
 Required Roles 
 --------------
 
-To edit documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have access granted through one
-of the following roles:
+To edit documents on an Atlas cluster, you must have privileges granted through 
+one of the following roles:
 
 - :authrole:`Project Owner` or :authrole:`Organization Owner`
 - :authrole:`Project Data Access Admin`