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JIRA - https://jira.mongodb.org/browse/DOCSP-42753
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Nice work on a big page! Found a few typos and left some other suggestions

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functionalities. Some sections might also use the ``Manager`` model,
which represents a person who manages a given band.

``Show`` model, which
represents a live performance by a certain band or musical group.
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This last sentence seems unfinished. Should it maybe go with the one before?

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functionalities. Some sections might also use the ``Manager`` model,
which represents a person who manages a given band.
``Show`` model, which
represents a live performance by a certain band or musical group.
functionalities. Some sections might also use the ``Manager`` model,
which represents a person who manages a given band, or a ``Show`` model, which
represents a live performance by a certain band or musical group.

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Oops, yes its a WIP because Idk what other types will be used on this page

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Condition Syntax
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This title seems a bit unclear and I don't think it adequately describes what this section is talking about. I think changing it to something like "Create a Query Filter" or something similar might be more fitting? Open to other ideas too

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LGTM!

@rustagir rustagir merged commit 3e498c6 into mongodb:standardized Oct 31, 2024
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