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pages/network/whois_ip/guide.en-gb.md

@@ -14,16 +14,16 @@ To find out who manages or provides a specific IP address, you will need to make
 
 **Find out how to find out if an IP address is managed, provided and/or associated with an OVHcloud service.**
 
-## Instructions
+## Requirements
 
-- You must have an IPv4 address (e.g.: 203.0.113.0) or an IPv6 address (e.g.: 2001:db8:0:1b00:203:0:113:0) for which you would like to know the provider or manager.
-- a device connected to the internet with an internet browser (e.g. Firefox, Chrome, Safari, Edge, etc.).
+- An IPv4 address (e.g.: 203.0.113.0) or an IPv6 address (e.g.: 2001:db8:0:1b00:203:0:113:0) for which you would like to know the provider or manager
+- A device connected to the internet, with a browser (e.g. Firefox, Chrome, Safari, Edge, etc.)
 
-## In practice
+## Instructions
 
-Go to the official WHOIS tool of the **I**nternet **C**orporation for **A**ssigned **N**ames and **N**umbers (**ICANN**) via the following link: [lookup.icann.org](https://lookup.icann.org/en/lookup).
+Go to the official WHOIS tool of the **I**nternet **C**orporation for **A**ssigned **N**ames and **N**umbers (**ICANN**) via the following link:  [lookup.icann.org](https://lookup.icann.org/en/lookup).
 
-On the page that pops up, enter the IPv4 address (e.g.: 203.0.113.0) or IPv6 address (e.g.: 2001:db8:0:1b00:203:0:113:0) in the input field, for which you would like to know the provider or manager.
+Enter the IPv4 address (e.g.: 203.0.113.0) or IPv6 address (e.g.: 2001:db8:0:1b00:203:0:113:0) in the input field, for which you would like to know the provider or manager.
 
 ![ICANN Lookup tool](/pages/assets/screens/other/web-tools/icann/launch-research.png){.thumbnail}
 
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@ Following this, information relating to the IP address will appear.
 >
 > The content and layout of the information in the result of a WHOIS query may differ depending on the IP address.
 
-To find out if OVHcloud manages or provides the IP address you entered in the input field, search for information on OVHcloud that relates to the service (e.g.: OVH-MNT; OVH SAS, 2 rue Kellermann, 59100 Roubaix, France; etc.)
+To find out if OVHcloud manages or provides the IP address you entered in the input field, look for information on OVHcloud that relates to the service (e.g.: OVH-MNT; OVH SAS, 2 rue Kellermann, 59100 Roubaix, France; etc.)
 
-If this is the case, it will confirm that the IP address for which you performed a WHOIS is well managed or provided by OVHcloud.
+If this is the case, it will confirm that the IP address for which you performed a WHOIS is managed or provided by OVHcloud.
 
 If applicable, search the information displayed for information related to the "registrant" (holder of the IP address) in order to find your IP address manager or provider.
 
@@ -47,4 +47,4 @@ For specialised services (SEO, development, etc.), contact [OVHcloud partners](/
 
 If you would like assistance using and configuring your OVHcloud solutions, please refer to our [support offers](/links/support).
 
-Join our [community of users](/links/community).
+Join our [community of users](/links/community).