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Thanks again for the suggestions. I noticed some things that could be polished, but overall that's great!

I'm also looking for ways to improve the quiz by adding questions for each new figure of speech.

Would you mind, for each figure of speech, replying with the following snippet?

- Figure of speech: <NAME>
- Question: <LABEL>
- Options
  - <ANSWER 1>
  - <ANSWER 2>
  - <ANSWER 3>
  - <ANSWER 4>
- Solution: <EXPLANATION>

This would allow me to populate the questions like this:

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question: wouldn't this be a zeugma?


L'asyndète donne un effet de rapidité, de dynamisme et d'accumulation. Elle peut suggérer l'urgence, l'émotion intense, ou créer un style plus direct et percutant. En supprimant les liens logiques, elle laisse aussi le lecteur établir lui-même les relations entre les éléments.

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suggestion: There is the famous "Veni, vedi, vici" quote we could use too here

## Pour aller plus loin

- [Wikipédia](https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asyndète)
- [Quillbot](https://quillbot.com/fr/blog/figures-de-style/asyndete/)
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issue: This is more of a personal opinion, but I'm not really fond of having an AI tool linked in this project


## En quoi ça consiste ?

L'aposiopèse est une figure de style qui consiste à interrompre brusquement une phrase, laissant le lecteur ou l'interlocuteur compléter lui-même la pensée. Cette interruption est généralement marquée par des points de suspension.
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issue: This is great but still feels a bit too verbose. Could we shorten it a bit?

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L'aposiopèse est une figure de style qui consiste à interrompre brusquement une phrase, laissant le lecteur ou l'interlocuteur compléter lui-même la pensée. Cette interruption est généralement marquée par des points de suspension.
L'aposiopèse est une figure de style qui consiste à interrompre brusquement une phrase, laissant le lecteur ou l'interlocuteur s'imaginer ce qui aurait été dit. Elle est souvent exprimée par des points de suspension (`...`).

The same remark could be applied to some other sections you suggested as well, if you could have a look into it.

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