Revise multicloud page content for clarity #16395
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Created six new category landing pages for the Google Ads campaign: Infrastructure as Code, Platform Engineering, DevOps Automation, Developer Platforms, Cloud Infrastructure Automation, and Multicloud. Each page includes category-specific titles, headings, and utm_source tracking parameters.
Removed usage of 'easiest' and 'simple' per STYLE-GUIDE.md which prohibits words that judge difficulty. Changed 'smartest and easiest way' to 'most comprehensive way', 'fastest and easiest way' to 'Use Pulumi IaC at scale', and 'simple queries' to 'powerful queries' across all six category landing pages.
Based on feedback, consolidated from 6 category pages to 3 persona-based landing pages: 1. Platform Teams (/gads/platform-teams/) - merges platform engineering + developer platforms Keywords: platform engineering, internal developer platform, developer productivity platform 2. Infrastructure/DevOps Engineers (/gads/infrastructure-engineers/) - merges IaC + DevOps automation + cloud infrastructure automation Keywords: IaC tools, DevOps automation, cloud infrastructure automation 3. Multi-Cloud Operations (/gads/multicloud/) - kept separate Keywords: multi-cloud, cross-cloud, hybrid cloud Each page uses appropriate UTM source tracking and category-specific DKI placeholders. All pages maintain style guide compliance (no 'easiest' or 'simple').
Updated the multicloud page to enhance clarity and consistency in messaging about Pulumi's capabilities and features.
Documentation ReviewThank you for revising the multicloud page content. The changes improve clarity and focus on multi-cloud capabilities. I've identified several issues that need attention: Critical Issues1. Missing title field in frontmatter (line 1-8)The frontmatter is missing a Suggestion: ---
title: "Multi-Cloud Infrastructure | Pulumi"
meta_desc: Unified platform for AWS, Azure, GCP, and 170+ providers. Manage multi-cloud infrastructure with one workflow.
layout: gads-template
block_external_search_index: true2. Missing period at end of sentence (line 223)The last case study description is missing a period at the end. Current (line 223): description: Built a multi-cloud, Kubernetes-based platform to standardize all deploymentsShould be: description: Built a multi-cloud, Kubernetes-based platform to standardize all deployments.Style and Clarity Issues3. Inconsistent capitalization (line 141)"Cloud Native" should be lowercase "cloud native" since it's not a proper noun. Current (line 141): - label: Cloud Native supportShould be: - label: Cloud native support4. Repetitive wording (line 217)"Increased velocity and speed" is redundant—velocity and speed are essentially the same concept. Current (line 217): description: Increased velocity and speed, with deployments that are up to 3x faster.Suggested: description: Increased deployment velocity, with deployments that are up to 3x faster.5. Missing links in case studies (lines 212-223)The original case studies had Positive Changes
Overall AssessmentThe revision improves clarity and messaging consistency. Please address the critical issues above, particularly the missing title field and punctuation. Consider whether the removed case study links should be restored. Mention me (@claude) if you'd like additional reviews or help with fixes. |
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Again looks like this PR has GADS changes and is not the name or description of the PR, should we close? |
Updated the multicloud page to enhance clarity and consistency in messaging about Pulumi's capabilities and features.
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