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Co-authored-by: Benedikt Rollik <[email protected]>

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Co-authored-by: Benedikt Rollik <[email protected]>

Author: RoRoJ

pages/load-balancer/api-cli/setting-up-ssl-offloading.mdx

@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ meta:
   title: Setting up SSL offloading via API
   description: Learn how to set up SSL offloading on Scaleway Load Balancer using API and CLI. Enhance security and performance with this comprehensive step-by-step guide.
 content:
-  h1: Setting up SSL Offloading via API
+  h1: Setting up SSL offloading via API
   paragraph: Learn how to set up SSL offloading on Scaleway Load Balancer using API and CLI. Enhance security and performance with this comprehensive step-by-step guide.
 tags: ssl offloading api ssl-offloading load-balancer
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-11-25
+  validation: 2025-06-02
   posted: 2021-05-26
 categories:
   - network

pages/load-balancer/how-to/delete-load-balancer.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ content:
   paragraph: Discover how to delete a Scaleway Load Balancer with ease. Follow this guide for step-by-step instructions to clean up your cloud resources securely and efficiently.
 tags: load-balancer load balancer
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-11-25
+  validation: 2025-06-02
   posted: 2021-05-26
 categories:
   - network

pages/load-balancer/how-to/set-up-s3-failover.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ content:
   paragraph: Learn how to set up S3 failover on Scaleway Load Balancer for seamless redundancy. Follow this step-by-step guide to ensure high availability and optimal performance for your cloud storage.
 tags: s3-failover amazon-s3 failover load-balancer object-storage bucket
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-11-25
+  validation: 2025-06-02
   posted: 2022-02-21
 categories:
   - network

tutorials/first-steps-linux-command-line/index.mdx

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ categories:
   - instances
   - elastic-metal
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-11-25
+  validation: 2025-06-02
   posted: 2023-11-16
 ---
 

tutorials/lb-firewall-haproxy-pfsense/index.mdx

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ categories:
   - load-balancer
 tags: Load-balancer pfSense HAproxy dedibox
 dates:
-  validation: 2023-11-27
+  validation: 2025-06-02
   validation_frequency: 18
   posted: 2020-03-11
 ---
@@ -25,24 +25,23 @@ This tutorial guides you through the installation of pfSense on a [Scaleway Dedi
 <Macro id="requirements" />
 
 - A Scaleway account logged into the [console](https://console.scaleway.com)
-- [Owner](/iam/concepts/#owner) status or [IAM permissions](/iam/concepts/#permission) allowing you to perform actions in the intended Organization
 - An [SSH key](/organizations-and-projects/how-to/create-ssh-key/)
 - A [Scaleway Dedibox](https://www.scaleway.com/en/dedibox/) with KVM-over-IP access
 
 ## Installing pfSense
 
 <Message type="important">
-  The installation of pfSense is done using the [KVM-over-IP device](/dedibox-kvm-over-ip/quickstart/) of the Elastic Metal server or the Scaleway Dedibox.
+  The installation of pfSense is done using the [KVM-over-IP device](/dedibox-kvm-over-ip/quickstart/) of the Scaleway Dedibox. Alternatively, you may be able to use an Elastic Metal server with [remote access](/elastic-metal/how-to/activate-remote-access/).
 </Message>
 
-1. Connect to the [KVM-over-IP device](/dedibox-kvm-over-ip/quickstart/) of your Elastic Metal server or Scaleway Dedibox.
+1. Connect to the [KVM-over-IP device](/dedibox-kvm-over-ip/quickstart/) of your Scaleway Dedibox.
 2. Depending on the type of the KVM-over-IP device, you can either mount a locally downloaded [pfSense ISO Image](https://www.pfsense.org/download/) or mount a virtual media from a [network share](https://virtualmedia.online.net/pfsense/).
 3. Boot the server from the ISO file or the virtual CD-ROM drive.
 4. The pfSense install wizard displays. Accept the copyright and distribution notice by pressing the **Enter** key on your keyboard:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_01.webp" alt="" />
-5. The pfSense welcome screen displays, select **Install** and confirm by pressing **Enter** to launch the setup wizard:
+5. The pfSense welcome screen displays. Select **Install** and confirm by pressing **Enter** to launch the setup wizard:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_02.webp" alt="" />
-6. Choose the Keymap for your pfSense installation. By default, the `US` keymap is preselected. Select the desired keymap from the list and confirm by pressing **Enter**:
+6. Choose the keymap for your pfSense installation. By default, the `US` keymap is preselected. Select the desired keymap from the list and confirm by pressing **Enter**:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_03.webp" alt="" />
 7. Choose the disk to install pfSense on. If your server has more than one disk, choose `ada0` as the installation destination. Press **Enter** to confirm.
     <Message type="important">
@@ -52,7 +51,7 @@ This tutorial guides you through the installation of pfSense on a [Scaleway Dedi
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_04.webp" alt="" />
 8. Select the partition scheme for the volume. The default option is `MBR`. You can keep this value and confirm by pressing **Enter**:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_05.webp" alt="" />
-9. The setup wizard starts copying the data from the virtual CD ROM drive to the server's hard disk. This may take a while depending on the connection speeds:
+9. The setup wizard starts copying the data from the virtual CD ROM drive to the server's hard disk. This may take a while depending on the connection speed:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_06.webp" alt="" />
 10. The automatic installation finishes. Choose **Yes** and confirm by pressing **Enter** to open a shell in the newly installed system to run a manual configuration:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_install_07.webp" alt="" />
@@ -117,7 +116,7 @@ Once rebooted, the pfSense welcome screen displays:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_setup_02.webp" alt="" />
 
     Click **Next** to move forward.
-3. In the second step, the wizard proposes different support options, proceed by clicking on **Next** if you do not need them.
+3. In the second step, the wizard proposes different support options. Proceed by clicking on **Next** if you do not need them.
 4. Enter general information about the pfSense server. These include the **Hostname** and the **Domain** of the server. Leave **Primary DNS Server** and **Secondary DNS Server** empty and the option **Override DNS** checked. Click **Next** to continue:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-pfsense_setup_04.webp" alt="" />
 5. Configure the [NTP Time Server](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Network_Time_Protocol). You can leave the default value and set the **Timezone** to **Europe/Paris**, then click **Next** to continue:
@@ -227,11 +226,11 @@ In this tutorial, we will configure a cluster of two pfSense servers that are us
 
     Click **Save**, then **Apply Changes** to activate the new configuration.
 
-    The configuration of the first pfSense is complete now.
+    The configuration of the first pfSense is now complete.
 
 ### Backing up the configuration and deploying a second machine
 
-Backup and download the configuration to deploy it on the second machine.
+Back up and download the configuration to deploy it on the second machine.
 
 1. Go to **Diagnostics** > **Backup & Restore**.
 2. In the **Backup Configuration** tab, click **Download configuration as XML** to download and save the configuration. The downloaded file named `config-<hostname>-<timestamp>.xml` contains all the configuration of pfSense (admin account, interfaces, VLAN settings, firewall rules). The downloaded file can be used to deploy a second pfSense machine, based on the **identical** hardware configuration.