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Author: nerda-codes

changelog/september2025/2025-09-22-elastic-metal-added-bulk-order-and-audit-trail-integrat.mdx

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ category: bare-metal
 product: elastic-metal
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-Two news features for Elastic Metal:
-- Bulk order: You can now place multiple orders of the same Elastic Metal resource in a single API request.
+Two new features for Elastic Metal are now available:
+- Bulk order: You can now place multiple orders for the same Elastic Metal resource in a single API request.
 - Audit Trail: Elastic Metal activity can now be tracked in the Audit Trail product, directly in the console. All API gateway events are listed. Find out which endpoints are supported in the [dedicated documentation](/audit-trail/reference-content/adt-supported-endpoints/).