Misc. edits

Author: rchinn1

src/segment-app/iam/roles.md

@@ -66,11 +66,11 @@ The following roles are only available to Segment Business Tier accounts.
 * Read-only access warehouse destination and warehouse destination settings. *(For example, Redshift, Postgres, BigQuery)*
 * **Scope:** Grants access to *all* warehouses.
 
-#### Entities Admin
-Full CRUD access to all Enttiies within a workspace, and can grant or revoke user permission.
+#### Entities Admin 
+Full CRUD (create, read, access, and delete) access to all Entities within a workspace. You can also grant or revoke user permissions.
 
-#### Entities Read-only 
-Read access to all Entities models and destinations in a workspace. 
+#### Entities Read-only
+Read-only access to all Entities models and destinations in a workspace. 
 
 ## PII Access
 

src/unify/linked-profiles/linked-events.md

@@ -24,8 +24,7 @@ With Linked Events, you can:
 
 Before getting started with Linked Events, you'll need:
 
-1. BigQuery, Snowflake, or Redshift data warehouse credentials with **write** access.
-- View the [BigQuery](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/bigquery-setup/), [Snowflake](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/snowflake-setup/), and [Redshift](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/redshift-setup/) setup guides. 
+1. [BigQuery](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/bigquery-setup/), [Snowflake](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/snowflake-setup/), or [Redshift](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/redshift-setup/) data warehouse credentials with **write** access.
 2. Access to Unify in your workspace. 
 3. Access to the Destination you'll be using with Linked Events so that you can validate your data. 
 
@@ -53,7 +52,7 @@ To use Connections with Linked Events:
 
 ## Step 1: Connect a data warehouse
 
-> success ""
+> info ""
 > Linked Events uses Segment's [Reverse ETL](/docs/connections/reverse-etl/) infrastructure for pulling in data from your warehouse. 
 
 To get started, you'll need to connect a data warehouse. Linked Events supports [BigQuery](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/bigquery/), [Snowflake](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/snowflake/), and [Redshift](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/redshift-setup/).

src/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/redshift-setup.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ On this page, you'll learn how to connect your Redshift data warehouse to Segmen
 
 To get started with Redshift:
 1. Log in to Redshift and select the Redshift cluster you want to connect. 
-2. Follow [these networking instructions](/docs/connections/storage/catalog/redshift/#networking) to configure network and security settings.
+2. Follow these [networking instructions](/docs/connections/storage/catalog/redshift/#networking) to configure network and security settings.
 
 ## Create a new role and user