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+title: About this document
+description: Explain how the SLSA specification is structured
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+This page explains how the SLSA specification is structured, what it contains, and how to use it.
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+## About this document
+
+This type of document is usually written just before the release is published.

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-title: About SLSA
-description: With supply chain attacks on the rise, a shared vocabulary and universal framework are needed to provide incremental guidance to harden supply chains for more secure software production. This page introduces the main concepts behind SLSA and explains how it can help anyone involved in producing, consuming, or providing infrastructure for software.
+title: About SLSA 
+description: With supply chain attacks on the rise, a shared vocabulary and universal framework are needed to provide incremental guidance to harden supply chains for more secure software production. This page introduces the main concepts behind SLSA and explains how it can help anyone involved in producing, consuming, or providing infrastructure for software. 
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+# About SLSA
+
 This page is an introduction to SLSA and its concepts. If you're new
 to SLSA, start here!
 
 ## What is SLSA?
 
-Supply-chain Levels for Software Artifacts, or SLSA ("salsa"), is a set of incrementally adoptable guidelines for supply chain security,
-established by industry consensus. The specification set by SLSA is useful for
-both software producers and consumers: producers can follow SLSA's guidelines to
-make their software supply chain more secure, and consumers can use SLSA to make
-decisions about whether to trust a software package.
+The term SLSA ("salsa") is an acronym that stands for Supply-chain Levels for Software Artifacts. It is a set of incrementally adoptable guidelines for supply chain security that has been established by industry consensus. The specification set by SLSA is useful for
+both software producers and consumers. Producers can follow SLSA's guidelines to make their software supply chain more secure, and consumers can use SLSA to make decisions about whether to trust a software package.
 
-SLSA offers:
+SLSA provides:
 
--   A common vocabulary to talk about software supply chain security
--   A way to secure your incoming supply chain by evaluating the trustworthiness of the artifacts you consume
--   An actionable checklist to improve your own software's security
--   A way to measure your efforts toward compliance with the [Secure Software Development Framework (SSDF)](https://csrc.nist.gov/Projects/ssdf)
+-   **A common vocabulary** to help people talk about software supply chain security across domains.
+-   **Security for your incoming supply chain** by evaluating the trustworthiness of the artifacts you consume.
+-   **Actionable checklists** to improve your software's security.
+-   **Compliance measurement** of your efforts to achieve compliance with the [Secure Software Development Framework (SSDF)](https://csrc.nist.gov/Projects/ssdf).
 
 ## Why SLSA is needed
 
 High-profile attacks like those against [SolarWinds](https://www.crowdstrike.com/blog/sunspot-malware-technical-analysis/) or [Codecov](https://about.codecov.io/apr-2021-post-mortem/) have exposed the kind of supply
 chain integrity weaknesses that may go unnoticed, yet quickly become very
-public, disruptive, and costly in today's environment when exploited. They've
-also shown that there are inherent risks not just in code itself, but at
+public, disruptive, and costly in today's environment when exploited. These attacks have also shown that there are inherent risks not just in code itself, but at
 multiple points in the complex process of getting that code into software
-systems—that is, in the **software supply chain**. Since these attacks are on
+systems; that is, into the *software supply chain*. Since these attacks are on
 the rise and show no sign of decreasing, a universal framework for hardening the
 software supply chain is needed, as affirmed by the U.S. Executive Order on
 Improving the Nation's Cybersecurity of May 12th, 2021.
 
 Security techniques for vulnerability detection and analysis of source code are
 essential, but are not enough on their own. Even after fuzzing or vulnerability
-scanning is completed, changes to code can happen, whether unintentionally or
+scanning is completed, unfortunately changes to code can take place, either unintentionally or
 from insider threats or compromised accounts. Risk for code modification exists at
-each link in a typical software supply chain, from source to build through
-packaging and distribution. Any weaknesses in the supply chain undermine
+each stage of a typical software supply chain, from source to build through
+packaging and distribution. Weaknesses in the supply chain undermines
 confidence in whether the code that you run is actually the code that you
 scanned.
 
 SLSA is designed to support automation that tracks code handling from source
-to binary, protecting against tampering regardless of the complexity
+to binary. This makes it possible to protect against tampering regardless of the complexity
 of the software supply chain. As a result, SLSA increases trust that the
-analysis and review performed on source code can be assumed to still apply to
-the binary consumed after the build and distribution process.
+analysis and review performed on the source code still applies to
+the binary consumed after the build and distribution process is complete.
 
 ## SLSA in layperson's terms
 
 There has been a [lot of discussion](https://ntia.gov/page/software-bill-materials) about the need for "ingredient labels" for
-software—a "software bill of materials" (SBOM) that tells users what is in their
+software, a "software bill of materials" (SBOM) that tells users what is in their
 software. Building off this analogy, SLSA can be thought of as all the food
 safety handling guidelines that make an ingredient list credible. From standards
-for clean factory environments so contaminants aren't introduced in packaging
+for clean factory environments, so contaminants aren't introduced in packaging
 plants, to the requirement for tamper-proof seals on lids that ensure nobody
 changes the contents of items sitting on grocery store shelves, the entire food
 safety framework ensures that consumers can trust that the ingredient list
 matches what's actually in the package they buy.
 
-Likewise, the SLSA framework provides this trust with guidelines and
+The SLSA framework provides this same kind of trust with guidelines and
 tamper-resistant evidence for securing each step of the software production
 process. That means you know not only that nothing unexpected was added to the
 software product, but also that the ingredient label itself wasn't tampered with
 and accurately reflects the software contents. In this way, SLSA helps protect
 against the risk of:
 
--   Code modification (by adding a tamper-evident "seal" to code after
-    source control)
--   Uploaded artifacts that were not built by the expected CI/CD platform (by marking
-    artifacts with a factory "stamp" that shows which build platform created it)
--   Threats against the build platform (by providing "manufacturing facility"
-    best practices for build platform services)
+-   **Code modification** by adding a tamper-evident "seal" to code after
+    source control.
+-   **Inaccurate uploaded artifacts** can be marked with a factory "stamp" that shows which build platform created it and avoiding those that were not built by the expected CI/CD platform.
+-   **Threats against the build platform** can be mitigated by providing "manufacturing facility" best practices for build platform services.
 
 For more exploration of this analogy, see the blog post
 [SLSA + SBOM: Accelerating SBOM success with the help of SLSA](/blog/2022/05/slsa-sbom).
 
 ## Who is SLSA for?
 
-In short: everyone involved in producing and consuming software, or providing
-infrastructure for software.
+Everyone involved in producing and consuming software, or providing
+infrastructure for software, can benefit from SLSA, including:
 
-**Software producers**, such as an open source project, a software vendor, or a
+-  **Software producers** such as an open source project team, a software vendor, or a
 team writing first-party code for use within the same company. SLSA gives you
-protection against tampering along the supply chain to your consumers, both
-reducing insider risk and increasing confidence that the software you produce
+protection against tampering, from the supply chain to your consumers,
+reduces insider risk and increases confidence that the software you produced
 reaches your consumers as you intended.
 
-**Software consumers**, such as a development team using open source packages, a
+-  **Software consumers** such as a development team using open source packages, a
 government agency using vendored software, or a CISO judging organizational
 risk. SLSA gives you a way to judge the security practices of the software you
 rely on and be sure that what you receive is what you expected.
 
-**Infrastructure providers**, who provide infrastructure such as an ecosystem
+-  **Infrastructure providers** who provide infrastructure such as an ecosystem
 package manager, build platform, or CI/CD platform. As the bridge between the
 producers and consumers, your adoption of SLSA enables a secure software supply
 chain between them.
 
 ## How SLSA works
 
-We talk about SLSA in terms of [tracks and levels](tracks.md).
-A SLSA track focuses on a particular aspect of a supply chain, such as the Build
-Track.
+We talk about SLSA in terms of *tracks* and *levels*.
+A SLSA track focuses on a particular portion of a supply chain, such as the Build or Source parts.
 
 Within each track, ascending levels indicate increasingly hardened security
 practices. Higher levels provide better guarantees against supply chain threats,
 but come at higher implementation costs. Lower SLSA levels are designed to be
 easier to adopt, but with only modest security guarantees. SLSA 0 is sometimes
-used to refer to software that doesn't yet meet any SLSA level. Currently, the
-SLSA Build Track encompasses Levels 1 through 3, but we envision higher levels
-to be possible in [future revisions](future-directions.md).
+used to refer to software that doesn't yet meet any SLSA level. 
 
-The combination of tracks and levels offers an easy way to discuss whether
-software meets a specific set of requirements. By referring to an artifact as
+The combination of track name and numeric level offers an easy way to discuss whether
+software meets a specific set of *requirements*. By referring to an artifact as
 meeting SLSA Build Level 3, for example, you're indicating in one phrase that
 the software artifact was built following a set of security practices that
-industry leaders agree protect against particular supply chain compromises.
+industry leaders agree protect against a particular supply chain compromise.
 
 ## What SLSA doesn't cover
 
 SLSA is only one part of a thorough approach to supply chain security. There
-are several areas outside SLSA's current framework that are nevertheless
-important to consider together with SLSA such as:
-
--   Code quality: SLSA does not tell you whether the developers writing the
-    source code followed secure coding practices.
--   Producer trust: SLSA does not address organizations that intentionally
-    produce malicious software, but it can reduce insider risks within an
-    organization you trust.
--   Transitive trust for dependencies: the SLSA level of an artifact is
-    independent of the level of its dependencies. You can use SLSA recursively to
-    also judge an artifact's dependencies on their own, but there is
-    currently no single SLSA level that applies to both an artifact and its
+are several areas outside SLSA's current framework that are
+important to also consider along with SLSA. They are:
+
+-   **Code quality** - Because SLSA does not tell you whether the developers writing the
+    source code followed secure coding practices, this needs to be addressed.
+-   **Producer trust** - SLSA does not identify organizations that intentionally
+    produce malicious software, but it can reduce insider risks within trusted
+    organizations.
+-   **Transitive trust for dependencies** - Because the SLSA level of an artifact is
+    independent of the level of its dependencies, you can use SLSA recursively to
+    also judge an artifact's dependencies on their own. But currently there is
+    no single SLSA level that applies to both an artifact and its
     transitive dependencies together. For a more detailed explanation of why,
     see the [FAQ](faq#q-why-is-slsa-not-transitive).

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+title: Mitigation recommendations
+description: Discussion of Suppply Chain threats and mitigations
+---
+
+A technical discussion of supply chain threats and mitigations with SLSA.
+
+## Supply chain threats and mitigations
+
+<!-- move info from cross-track threats & mitigations here -->
+