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Author: dadlerj

docs/analytics/cloud.mdx

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 # Sourcegraph Cloud Analytics
 
-The following instructions are for all Sourcegraph Cloud and self-hosted customers who have upgraded to a sufficient version of Sourcegraph (5.9+) and fully enabled telemetry usage. Customers that self-host can also view our [self-hosted analytics enablement](/self-hosted).
+The following instructions are for all Sourcegraph Cloud and self-hosted customers who have upgraded to a sufficient version of Sourcegraph (5.9+) and fully enabled usage telemetry. Customers that self-host can also view our [self-hosted analytics enablement](/self-hosted).
 
 ![Sourcegraph-cloud-analytics](https://storage.googleapis.com/sourcegraph-assets/cloud-analytics.png)