Update 15/umbraco-commerce/release-notes/v15.0.0-rc.md

Author: eshanrnh

15/umbraco-commerce/release-notes/v15.0.0-rc.md

@@ -78,6 +78,6 @@ In addition to the asynchronous work, Umbraco Commerce v15 has been updated to d
 
 ## What to Test and How to Give Feedback
 
-We would welcome feedback on any installation / upgrade issues along with bugs found in any of the completed sections as detailed above.
+We welcome any feedback on installation or upgrade issues, as well as any bugs found in the sections mentioned above.
 
 Issues can be raised on the Umbraco Commerce issue tracker at [https://github.com/umbraco/Umbraco.Commerce.Issues/issues](https://github.com/umbraco/Umbraco.Commerce.Issues/issues).