Update translation to align with latest English documents

[yoon-jeong-ho15]

This PR is follow up of #812.

[jonniebigodes]

@yoon-jeong-ho15 thank you so much for taking the time to put together this pull request and helping update the translation. Appreciate it 🙏 !

I've checked it from a technical standpoint, and all is good on my end.
If you don't mind, I would like someone to review as well, since I'm not a native Korean speaker. If @wihyanghoon has the bandwidth to check it, all good; otherwise, I'll reach out on our Discord and socials and ask for someone to check it.

With this in mind, I'm going to put a clock on it, and if no one comes forward during next week. I'm going to go ahead and merge this and get the translation out, and we can follow up with a subsequent pull request.

Does that sound good to you?

Let me know, and we'll go from there.

Hope you have a fantastic day

Stay safe

[yoon-jeong-ho15]

Yes It is alll good for me!