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Split off a new module Move installer considerations to installer overview Merge two modules Move things around in the new merged module Change module type Update disconnected content with the same changes
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This is now ready for review. I'm open to refining abstracts because some of them are completely new. I also reworded some of the procedure steps (For example to add wording like "If you want to..." where I needed to remove block titles.) so I can revisit those too. The other lines that show as new are just being moved from somewhere else. Especially considering that a new installation guide is coming, I don't think we need to spend that much time reviewing and adjusting those. |
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| The {foreman-installer} utility is a collection of Puppet modules. | ||
| Before using it to install {ProjectServer}, consider that installations can take tens of minutes and that repeated runs might overwrite manual configuration changes. |
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| Before using it to install {ProjectServer}, consider that installations can take tens of minutes and that repeated runs might overwrite manual configuration changes. |
IMO this only duplicates lines 10 and 13.
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It does, but then line 7 is not enough for a proper abstract :/ The point was to summarize what users will read about in more detail in the module itself. Is that okay?
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I am fine either way; this is not blocking your PR.
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| For more information, see {InstallingSmartProxyDocURL}opening-required-ports[Opening required ports in _{InstallingSmartProxyDocTitle}_]. | ||
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| ifeval::["{context}" == "installing-capsule-server"] | ||
| ifeval::["{context}" == "installing-{smart-proxy}-server"] |
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| ifeval::["{context}" == "installing-{smart-proxy}-server"] | |
| ifeval::["{context}" == "installing-{smart-proxy-context}-server"] |
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| = Registering to {ProjectServer} | ||
| [id="prerequisites-for-registering-{smart-proxy-context}-to-{project-context}-server"] |
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| [id="prerequisites-for-registering-{smart-proxy-context}-to-{project-context}-server"] | |
| [id="prerequisites-for-registering-{smart-proxy-context}-server-to-{project-context}-server"] |
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I suggest to rename the file to guides/common/modules/ref_prerequisites-for-registering-smart-proxy-server-to-project-server.adoc
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| If your {ProjectServer} must remain behind a firewall that blocks HTTP and HTTPS, you can configure an HTTP proxy for communication with external systems, including compute resources, by using Hammer CLI. | ||
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| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the proxies that you set for compute resources. |
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| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the proxies that you set for compute resources. | |
| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the HTTP proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the HTTP proxies that you set for compute resources. |
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| If your {ProjectServer} must remain behind a firewall that blocks HTTP and HTTPS, you can configure an HTTP proxy for communication with external systems, including compute resources, by using the {ProjectWebUI}. | ||
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| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the proxies that you set for compute resources. |
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| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the proxies that you set for compute resources. | |
| Note that if you are using compute resources for provisioning, and you want to use a different HTTP proxy with the compute resources, the HTTP proxy that you set for all {Project} communication takes precedence over the HTTP proxies that you set for compute resources. |
| = Adding a default HTTP proxy by using Hammer CLI | ||
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| If your network uses an HTTP Proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. |
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| If your network uses an HTTP Proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. | |
| If your network uses an HTTP proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. |
| = Adding a default HTTP proxy by using {ProjectWebUI} | ||
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| If your network uses an HTTP Proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. |
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| If your network uses an HTTP Proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. | |
| If your network uses an HTTP proxy, you can configure {ProjectServer} to use an HTTP proxy for requests to the Red{nbsp}Hat Content Delivery Network (CDN) or another content source. |
| {ProjectName}'s realm feature provides administrators with the ability to map the {ProjectName} host groups to the {FreeIPA} parameter `userclass` which allow administrators to configure automembership. | ||
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| When nested host groups are used, they are sent to the {FreeIPA} server as they are displayed in the {ProjectName} User Interface. | ||
| For example, "Parent/Child/Child". |
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| For example, "Parent/Child/Child". | |
| For example, `Parent/Child/Child`. |
| Perform these steps on the hosts you want to configure. | ||
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| . If you want to configure the host with the bootstrap script, run the bootstrap script with the `--server _My-Alternate-FQDN.example.com_` option to register the host to the alternate {Project} CNAME: |
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You could also make this an unordered list ine lin 14 and 20 because the user will only pick one of the other, not both in sequence.
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| Complete the following procedure on {Project} and every {SmartProxy} that you want to use: |
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| Complete the following procedure on {Project} and every {SmartProxy} that you want to use: | |
| Complete the following procedure on your {ProjectServer} and every {SmartProxyServer} that you want to use. |
What changes are you introducing?
Various changes, including:
The most notable change is probably:
Why are you introducing these changes? (Explanation, links to references, issues, etc.)
To ensure a clean https://github.com/jhradilek/asciidoctor-dita-vale/ check for the guide.
Anything else to add? (Considerations, potential downsides, alternative solutions you have explored, etc.)
N/A
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