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| <!-- How it works --> | ||
| <section class="ui vertical segment very padded" id="how-it-works"> | ||
| <div class="ui container center aligned"> |
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If we don't have anything here, it's probably best to remove this section and come back to it later. We want to be moving towards less mockup copy and content in the site.
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👍 Section removed.
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Noted a bunch of copy changes, but it was really helpful to separate the discussion on the layout of the page and come back to discuss the content separately.
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| <i class="icon check circle green"></i> | ||
| <div class="content"> | ||
| <div class="description">Issue Tracking</div> |
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I followed EA's lead and attached the Wikipedia style guide for content in this repo. For basically everything except h1's, we'd use sentence case. These bullet points should be cased down:
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| <div class="description">Issue tracking</div> |
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Bulleted_and_numbered_lists
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These bullet list items seem to refer to something outside RTD. Perhaps we want to describe what RTD does here?
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| <div class="extra content"> | ||
| <div class="ui labels"> | ||
| <span class="ui label basic large"><i class="icon primary hourglass outline"></i> Always up to date</span> | ||
| <span class="ui label basic large"><i class="icon primary hourglass outline"></i> Automation</span> |
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"Automation" sounds like a bit of a fragment. What is "automation" referring to here? It seems like there is probably a good deal of overlap between this and "Always up to date".
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Good point. I'll remove "automation".
Still, its the same problem as in the technical writer features section. We need to convey how RTD can add value to technical teams and I have no better suggestions.
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Agreed. Let's come back to this one with more copy review
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I opened issue #46 to help keeping track of this.
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I absolutely agree! It's really hard to review copy in the same PRs that we review code and project scaffolding and also more prone to create conflicts with other PRs or loose important thought processes. Is there anything I can do to promote separate discussions? I first thought of these latest PR batch as simply porting the I propose we try to close these PRs as a second mockup and come back to them with separate PRs, each focused on one single objective, to polishing each technical, conceptual, graphic and scaffolding aspects separately. |
@nienn That's fair! Would it help to maybe open an issue for each page that have ongoing copy work then? We have been merging development level display changes lately, so what is merged isn't yet complete already. So, it's fine to be merging more development level copy as well then, but I do want to keep up momentum on completing the pages. I would hold off on tweaking any graphics until we have copy though, there are a few places where graphics are meant to match copy, and the copy could change. |
Yes! This absolutely helps. We might become a bit overwhelmed with these issues soon thought. Maybe we can start adding issues to milestones and/or add appropriate labels to keep track of the ones that are required before any release. Also maybe start adding labels to distinguish between
Yes, I agree. I would only add that its important to know where there will be a graphic and the general shape/concept of that graphic, as that will alter the copy too. Both should live together. |
Yeah, I was going to ask if milestones would be helpful. We are accumulating issues and prioritization would help. We can also move things to the roadmap view in Trello if you'd prefer. I'm open to either. Feel free to apply any of the labels that you think make sense. We already use some of the labels you mention, if you haven't seen it yet, our issue triaging guidelines are here: https://dev.readthedocs.io/en/latest/issue-labels.html |
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I'm going to commit these two suggestions - #28 (comment) and #28 (comment) - and rebase. |
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This also looks ready to merge! If there are improvements to the copy etc, we'll address these with some iteration.
Note: #27 is currently blocked on #23Edit: #23 has been merged.